Score: 7

"Solid concept, execution could be improved."

submission: oldPod.

date: August 26, 2008

for one, it's clearly too short. The animation could always be better. But it's funny.

If you were going to re-do this, my suggestion would be to milk the gags for as long as possible. Don't just make the person go from vertical to horizontal when they fall, make it take longer, and make them twitch or try to get up and fail.

Because really, who doesn't like laughing at old people?

4/5
~Qwerty

Score: 10

"Hilarious."

submission: Meet the Spy

date: June 29, 2008

I didn't quite get, at the begining, that he was in the blue base. then I realized that, and was like "lol, they're interviewing him in the enemy base. oh what's that glowy thing?" "oh, it's the intel."

So I wasn't surprised by him putting it on and escaping, but if I hadn't, not sure how that reveal would have worked. Maybe make it more "kapowie, I've been here the whole time."

good nonetheless. (it's a word, yeah?)

~AJ

Score: 7

"needs some editing work"

submission: Hamlet: Acts I - Iii

date: May 9, 2008

okay... the intro needs to be cut down ALOT. it has nothing to do with hamlet, and I actualy thought it wasn't going to involve hamlet at all.

once you get to the real jokes, it's funny. just clean up transitions, get to scenes as quicka s possible.

~Qwerty

Score: 7

"I like where it's going."

submission: Absortion(demo)

date: August 27, 2008

The transition at :27 is really abrupt. it builds up nice, but the energy just... disappears, it doesn't really go anywhere.

Definitely interested in where this one will go. hopefully will hang out in some of the higher reigsters at a more intense part of the song.

4/5 for being a demo.
~Qwerty

Score: 8

"Good Intro, Good Outro"

submission: Allegretto Rock

date: May 16, 2008

Middle doesn't excite me as much. Might just be the source material.

First minute is excellet at building things up. Love after that it seems to get a bit repetitive.

Score: 10

"Excellent instrumentation."

submission: Guilty

date: April 17, 2008

all the instruments, from the guitar, to the oragny/piano thing around 1:45, to the wondeful strings at the end.

the main theme is repeated a bit much, but it is pop, and it's nice hearing it in different instruments.

5/5
~Qwerty