Score: 7

"Solid concept, execution could be improved."

submission: oldPod.

date: August 26, 2008

for one, it's clearly too short. The animation could always be better. But it's funny.

If you were going to re-do this, my suggestion would be to milk the gags for as long as possible. Don't just make the person go from vertical to horizontal when they fall, make it take longer, and make them twitch or try to get up and fail.

Because really, who doesn't like laughing at old people?

4/5
~Qwerty

Score: 10

"Hilarious."

submission: Meet the Spy

date: June 29, 2008

I didn't quite get, at the begining, that he was in the blue base. then I realized that, and was like "lol, they're interviewing him in the enemy base. oh what's that glowy thing?" "oh, it's the intel."

So I wasn't surprised by him putting it on and escaping, but if I hadn't, not sure how that reveal would have worked. Maybe make it more "kapowie, I've been here the whole time."

good nonetheless. (it's a word, yeah?)

~AJ

Score: 7

"needs some editing work"

submission: Hamlet: Acts I - Iii

date: May 9, 2008

okay... the intro needs to be cut down ALOT. it has nothing to do with hamlet, and I actualy thought it wasn't going to involve hamlet at all.

once you get to the real jokes, it's funny. just clean up transitions, get to scenes as quicka s possible.

~Qwerty

Score: 10

"So here's my process"

submission: Pico: Ace Attorney

date: April 30, 2008

I start up the game... looks like decent quality... good music, good use of characters...

then comes the Beard...

5'd

:D

~Qwerty

Score: 10

"lulz"

submission: It was already broken

date: April 24, 2008

Actually can be kinda creepy when you think about the kind of people who roam Newgrounds.

especially the way they look (and particularly their... attire) at 1:16 am

*ahem*

so what's the fifth wall, would you guess?

5/5
~Qwerty

Score: 5

"Always have sound."

submission: Darkness of light ep1

date: April 24, 2008

either have music running, or use SFX, or else it loses an entire dimension.

the full animation in the beginning looked good, just make sure to finalize all the other parts so it looks consistent and decent.

~Qwerty

Score: 8

"much better"

submission: Crappyone - alpha

date: April 23, 2008

5'd

:D

Score: 10

"lulz"

submission: Charlie the Unicorn

date: April 17, 2008

Some annoying people were quoting this before, but only the annoying unicorns. I rather Identify with Charlie actually.... except for the part where they steal the kidney.

actually the part that made me really like this is the leoplurodon. MAGICAL Leoplurodon!

Score: 10

"lollers"

submission: Transformers Mediocrity

date: April 10, 2008

why does Optimus prime remind me of the Mastermind?

Score: 8

"excellent first flash!"

submission: Subject 42

date: April 8, 2008

good attention to detail.

I'd make sure there's always music going if there's also action. when he was running some good chase music could've picked up the tension.

from a story standpoint, it's not really clear what he's running from. Is he some kind of test subject? if so, why didn't they try to get him without harming him? how did he get out so easily? ect.

5/5
~Qwerty