Animation could use a leeeeetle work, like how their elbows were in their food/plates... but for the most part it was a very enjoyable style. the voice work and sound editing is magnificent. I love how the ... round headed one? the one complaining about the pancakes; he sounds or at least talks like the Emperor from the Emperors New Groove. Which is awesome.
One thing i don't get...
did she shoot the marines? What the hell happened in there?
Animation on the cities, nukes, and stuff is amazing. animating the individual people is not bad at all, but could use some more smoothing out, but I'm sure that comes as the series goes on. Never seen a serious series that didn't improve it's art.
Damn, you're good.
Really pretty believable set-up, and then when the sub sends off those nukes, and they're in space, I'm like "okay, nukes, going to somewhere else... wait, wtf just flew past them? oh shit..."
Solid concept, execution could be improved.
for one, it's clearly too short. The animation could always be better. But it's funny.
If you were going to re-do this, my suggestion would be to milk the gags for as long as possible. Don't just make the person go from vertical to horizontal when they fall, make it take longer, and make them twitch or try to get up and fail.
Because really, who doesn't like laughing at old people?
I didn't quite get, at the begining, that he was in the blue base. then I realized that, and was like "lol, they're interviewing him in the enemy base. oh what's that glowy thing?" "oh, it's the intel."
So I wasn't surprised by him putting it on and escaping, but if I hadn't, not sure how that reveal would have worked. Maybe make it more "kapowie, I've been here the whole time."
good nonetheless. (it's a word, yeah?)
needs some editing work
okay... the intro needs to be cut down ALOT. it has nothing to do with hamlet, and I actualy thought it wasn't going to involve hamlet at all.
once you get to the real jokes, it's funny. just clean up transitions, get to scenes as quicka s possible.
Actually can be kinda creepy when you think about the kind of people who roam Newgrounds.
especially the way they look (and particularly their... attire) at 1:16 am
so what's the fifth wall, would you guess?
Always have sound.
either have music running, or use SFX, or else it loses an entire dimension.
the full animation in the beginning looked good, just make sure to finalize all the other parts so it looks consistent and decent.
i dont know how to fill the sound bwahhh!!
Some annoying people were quoting this before, but only the annoying unicorns. I rather Identify with Charlie actually.... except for the part where they steal the kidney.
actually the part that made me really like this is the leoplurodon. MAGICAL Leoplurodon!
why does Optimus prime remind me of the Mastermind?
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