duuuuuuuuude....
the lightning in the begining with the yelling, that turns into the fire at the end.
that's powerful. its amazing how much adding an element (fire, water, lightning) into the backround makes the song that much more powerful.
although I have to agree that it sounds more like a Sad for 9/11 song, instead of a hippocrytical bush.
but I agree with the statement you're trying to convey, I just don't think its coming across well. but the song is good.